Okay, okay, this is really good. My humble and totally biased opinion is that you should give it a try. In favor: the bottom isn't stupid, he's very intelligent And strong in herself, there is no miscommunication, the bottom is not violated (there is an insinuation that something like that could happen but nothing more), the top is an adult with a developed frontal lobe (which is almost unheard of), the plot is interesting and there are no loose ends (and if there are, I don't want to know about them!), It's a slow burn, and I think the first kiss is around chapter 20-something. On the downside: for me it's the lightsaber (I'd rather there be nothing than be dazzled by that) And the ending was very rushed; it could easily have continued for another 100 chapters. Read it, if you don't like it I'll give you your money back!
Okay, okay, this is really good. My humble and totally biased opinion is that you should give it a try.
In favor: the bottom isn't stupid, he's very intelligent And strong in herself, there is no miscommunication, the bottom is not violated (there is an insinuation that something like that could happen but nothing more), the top is an adult with a developed frontal lobe (which is almost unheard of), the plot is interesting and there are no loose ends (and if there are, I don't want to know about them!), It's a slow burn, and I think the first kiss is around chapter 20-something.
On the downside: for me it's the lightsaber (I'd rather there be nothing than be dazzled by that) And the ending was very rushed; it could easily have continued for another 100 chapters.
Read it, if you don't like it I'll give you your money back!