It would’ve been better if the author had removed the part where a stranger assaulted the omega before the alpha found him..it honestly left a bitter taste in my mouth. The stigma around omegas is also quite heavy, since they’re often treated more like objects than people, which can be uncomfortable to read at times.
On the positive side, the alpha is a major green flag. He’s patient, respectful, and genuinely caring, which really stands out in this kind of setting. That dynamic gives the story a healing quality and makes it easier to stay emotionally invested despite the heavier themes!
However, the pacing feels a bit rushed in some parts, and the art is only mediocre, which doesn’t fully support or elevate the emotional moments as much as it could.
Overall, the core idea is definitely there, and if it were written with better pacing and stronger execution.m (and with improved artwork) this could’ve been a real gem. It's not perfect but overall, I like it.
It would’ve been better if the author had removed the part where a stranger assaulted the omega before the alpha found him..it honestly left a bitter taste in my mouth. The stigma around omegas is also quite heavy, since they’re often treated more like objects than people, which can be uncomfortable to read at times.
On the positive side, the alpha is a major green flag. He’s patient, respectful, and genuinely caring, which really stands out in this kind of setting. That dynamic gives the story a healing quality and makes it easier to stay emotionally invested despite the heavier themes!
However, the pacing feels a bit rushed in some parts, and the art is only mediocre, which doesn’t fully support or elevate the emotional moments as much as it could.
Overall, the core idea is definitely there, and if it were written with better pacing and stronger execution.m (and with improved artwork) this could’ve been a real gem. It's not perfect but overall, I like it.