my little rant ofc u don’t have to agree but i wanna get my thoughts out since its like 3am for me. i love the little found family, it’s adorable but the people around them just have to go.
ml being completely out of it so much so that he assaults the mc, not really a great way to start off the story but fine. ml apologizes and recognizes his mistake, awesome now we can move on to their love story.
lowkey anything after the 6th chapter is so…skippable. the mc was targeted by some random guy that knew the ml. mc was later on kidnapped and then almost raped. neither the kidnapper nor the guy that unintentionally(?) sent the kidnapper got any repercussions. we get extra story sure but what else? what was the point of the ml facing all this.
Tens real father shows up, spews a bunch of nonsense for a few days then leaves. besides finding out who Ten belongs to and that the sister really loved her brother, what exsctly was the point of this conflict.
now we have the brother who is causing more drama. all of these conflicts don’t really have anything to do with the family itself but the random ass people in their lifewhy are y’all here??? what purpose do they serve fr. a good thing i can say it that it doesn’t last too long and everything gets solved in under 10 chapters
my little rant ofc u don’t have to agree but i wanna get my thoughts out since its like 3am for me. i love the little found family, it’s adorable but the people around them just have to go.
ml being completely out of it so much so that he assaults the mc, not really a great way to start off the story but fine. ml apologizes and recognizes his mistake, awesome now we can move on to their love story.
lowkey anything after the 6th chapter is so…skippable. the mc was targeted by some random guy that knew the ml. mc was later on kidnapped and then almost raped. neither the kidnapper nor the guy that unintentionally(?) sent the kidnapper got any repercussions. we get extra story sure but what else? what was the point of the ml facing all this.
Tens real father shows up, spews a bunch of nonsense for a few days then leaves. besides finding out who Ten belongs to and that the sister really loved her brother, what exsctly was the point of this conflict.
now we have the brother who is causing more drama. all of these conflicts don’t really have anything to do with the family itself but the random ass people in their lifewhy are y’all here??? what purpose do they serve fr. a good thing i can say it that it doesn’t last too long and everything gets solved in under 10 chapters