1. Korean bullies are like idk, but female mc js stays quiet fr, I know some people are like that but it pissed me off, because it’s her cousin that’s doing it too… like as a quiet person i would’ve been cussing and causing up hell in there. That’s js me
2. Mc climbing the ladder… WHY WAS SHE ARCHING SO HARD??
3. Idk but the couple give off stinky vibes.. js getting washed in a sink.. and those wounds on his back look nasty fr.. he might get an infection fr
4. n like this is taking place in highschool the author keeps adding like suggestive material in it.. I feel like it’s hinting at cracking fr.
A lot of hs romance stories put suggestive stuff in it, esp the whole raining and shirt becomes seethrough trope. I think they couldve aged up the characters to be 18 though since u can still be in hs at 18. Idk how old they are tho
IVE GOT SOME CRITICS.
1. Korean bullies are like idk, but female mc js stays quiet fr, I know some people are like that but it pissed me off, because it’s her cousin that’s doing it too… like as a quiet person i would’ve been cussing and causing up hell in there. That’s js me
2. Mc climbing the ladder… WHY WAS SHE ARCHING SO HARD??
3. Idk but the couple give off stinky vibes.. js getting washed in a sink.. and those wounds on his back look nasty fr.. he might get an infection fr
4. n like this is taking place in highschool the author keeps adding like suggestive material in it.. I feel like it’s hinting at cracking fr.