Ark and Julius relationship is very cute and I like how tender he is with ark in not pushing for more until ark was ready, felt very organic.Will say that the story (altho I know it's not done) would've benifited more if it was longer. Like I wish we got to see the two graduallt realise their feelings for one another instead of it being immediate infatuation. Also would've been great if we had been given more world building before the abrupt time skip. It's kinda funny tho that their world randomly has mpreg?? And we still don't know why or how. Are all men in their world capable of giving birth? Is there a procedure or medicine you have to take or does it just require regular old cum?? Feels like this was thrown in to avoid any angst of "we can't be together because I can't give you a heir" or smth. Although I like Ark's and Julius relationship I kinda don't dig how much of a bitch ark is? Lol I'm sorry but theres no other way to describe his personality other than bitch and by that I mean hoq utterly spineless he is at all times? You can't have your uke be both weak physically (twink) and emotionally that's a deadly and annoying combo.
It's great that he figured out he needs to be kind to help his doomed future in anyway but that doesn't mean you gotta be a doormat bro T_T He really saw his OPP take his loyal as a dog man to his bedroom and thought aw shucks I guess Julius perfers him :/ Bitch what?? I get why he has insecruities but there has to come a time where you need to be confident and believe in your lover whom you've known for 10 yrs or your relationship will not work out. That guy was so close to raping Julius while your over there crying in your bedroom. And speaking of Julius I miss how he was A lot more expressive as a kid/teen compared to now it's like adulthood turned him into an outwarldy stone cold top
Ark and Julius relationship is very cute and I like how tender he is with ark in not pushing for more until ark was ready, felt very organic.Will say that the story (altho I know it's not done) would've benifited more if it was longer. Like I wish we got to see the two graduallt realise their feelings for one another instead of it being immediate infatuation. Also would've been great if we had been given more world building before the abrupt time skip. It's kinda funny tho that their world randomly has mpreg?? And we still don't know why or how. Are all men in their world capable of giving birth? Is there a procedure or medicine you have to take or does it just require regular old cum?? Feels like this was thrown in to avoid any angst of "we can't be together because I can't give you a heir" or smth. Although I like Ark's and Julius relationship I kinda don't dig how much of a bitch ark is? Lol I'm sorry but theres no other way to describe his personality other than bitch and by that I mean hoq utterly spineless he is at all times? You can't have your uke be both weak physically (twink) and emotionally that's a deadly and annoying combo.
It's great that he figured out he needs to be kind to help his doomed future in anyway but that doesn't mean you gotta be a doormat bro T_T He really saw his OPP take his loyal as a dog man to his bedroom and thought aw shucks I guess Julius perfers him :/ Bitch what?? I get why he has insecruities but there has to come a time where you need to be confident and believe in your lover whom you've known for 10 yrs or your relationship will not work out. That guy was so close to raping Julius while your over there crying in your bedroom. And speaking of Julius I miss how he was A lot more expressive as a kid/teen compared to now it's like adulthood turned him into an outwarldy stone cold top