I liked it… i read comments saying this is ass and all but for a psychological being this thrilling and the goosebumps u get from it—this is unusual in the bl community. Ive read other psychological bls but this is one of the most psychological to ever psychological, not just physical abuse and stuff but actually mentaly twisted. The ending was unexpected and an open one. I just dont like how the ending felt empty, i wish there was a reasonable transition to that part cuz it felt like “whatever this is good enough”
The good part is chapter 1-30 and after that it just came crashing down narration based. In this genre narration and pov is what makes up the whole thing sooo yeah. The plot is amazing, the delivery just didnt come up to par to what it needs and deserves:)
I liked it… i read comments saying this is ass and all but for a psychological being this thrilling and the goosebumps u get from it—this is unusual in the bl community. Ive read other psychological bls but this is one of the most psychological to ever psychological, not just physical abuse and stuff but actually mentaly twisted. The ending was unexpected and an open one.
I just dont like how the ending felt empty, i wish there was a reasonable transition to that part cuz it felt like “whatever this is good enough”
The good part is chapter 1-30 and after that it just came crashing down narration based. In this genre narration and pov is what makes up the whole thing sooo yeah. The plot is amazing, the delivery just didnt come up to par to what it needs and deserves:)