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It could use a bit more finishing

V7 May 2, 2026 8:58 pm

I finished this is one sitting I'm actually suprised it's actually quite good plot wise but I wish there was a bit more attention given to the development between mc and ml like why does it feel like the first life mc and ml had more chemistry and more sense than the one's now but I was actually suprised with a lot of things handled in the plot from character perspective and even comic moments it actually hit but is it a 10 out of 10 story ? No. but plot wise I was hooked from start to finish it really kept me invested and off guard and that's time well spend to me

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