The art is really half-baked. It is pretty, sure, but misses so many details, like there was one scene when the ML (top) was sick with a cold, so the uke decided to order some soup for him... But in that entire scene, the uke's hand was held up like it should have a phone, but it didn't!! Similarly in chap 39, the seme walks over to the table with his hands in a pose like he is holding a tray, but again, there is nothing in his hands, no tray, no plates, just thin air. In the chapter where they use sex toys, the uke's hands are cuffed up behind his back and they are drawn completely wrong. Like a hand must be broken to turn like THAT. The dialogues and actions suggest that the vibrators have strings, but there are no strings drawn in the scene.
All these errors and inconsistencies build up over time. As other comments point, the sex scenes are choppy, like they are missing panels and the expressions suggest an action but it is not drawn anywhere, like a kiss or a bite, but we don't see it. And this is like a fully uncensored comic, so the only explanation is poor artwork.
The characters look so pretty, the body proportions and background and everything looks fine, but almost everytime where detailing is reuired, the artwork fails.
In my head, I cooked up a scenario, where the main artist is doing their job sincerely, but the colouring and detailing assistant is half-assing things and just skipping or forgetting to add important things. And the publishing deadlines are so strict that editors just ignore the missing details and publish it on the website.
It's such a waste of someone's hardwork. I mean the plot is not that great to begin with, the art had a lot of potential but crappy final touches are just ruining everything.
I'm sorry for the long rant, I just had to get it out of my system.
The art is really half-baked. It is pretty, sure, but misses so many details, like there was one scene when the ML (top) was sick with a cold, so the uke decided to order some soup for him... But in that entire scene, the uke's hand was held up like it should have a phone, but it didn't!! Similarly in chap 39, the seme walks over to the table with his hands in a pose like he is holding a tray, but again, there is nothing in his hands, no tray, no plates, just thin air. In the chapter where they use sex toys, the uke's hands are cuffed up behind his back and they are drawn completely wrong. Like a hand must be broken to turn like THAT. The dialogues and actions suggest that the vibrators have strings, but there are no strings drawn in the scene.
All these errors and inconsistencies build up over time. As other comments point, the sex scenes are choppy, like they are missing panels and the expressions suggest an action but it is not drawn anywhere, like a kiss or a bite, but we don't see it. And this is like a fully uncensored comic, so the only explanation is poor artwork.
The characters look so pretty, the body proportions and background and everything looks fine, but almost everytime where detailing is reuired, the artwork fails.
In my head, I cooked up a scenario, where the main artist is doing their job sincerely, but the colouring and detailing assistant is half-assing things and just skipping or forgetting to add important things. And the publishing deadlines are so strict that editors just ignore the missing details and publish it on the website.
It's such a waste of someone's hardwork. I mean the plot is not that great to begin with, the art had a lot of potential but crappy final touches are just ruining everything.
I'm sorry for the long rant, I just had to get it out of my system.