I like the pace, I like the world building, the characters, I LOVE the politics that is being portray here in the story, the expansions, the ideals, the power classes and such, what really struck to me is the horned rats situation its so tragic to see their fate I can relatively compare them to some of todays countries or some citizens in countries, my heart breaks for them.
I can see some changes in the naga labyrinth after the war, I THINK mc should really start training his troops more (like spar and feedback) than relying on himself, he leads in not so bad way but somewhat lacking as his power and troops are expanding fast. I know his sentiments on protecting his home (the labyrinth and members) is strong but he basically backpack carry them which somewhat hindering their growth and experience. If he keeps that up the story will only highlight him and make his troops a mere decoration, a not so bad but a cliche and somewhat boring.
I am rooting for them to win and also a little character development for the mc.
I like the pace, I like the world building, the characters, I LOVE the politics that is being portray here in the story, the expansions, the ideals, the power classes and such, what really struck to me is the horned rats situation its so tragic to see their fate I can relatively compare them to some of todays countries or some citizens in countries, my heart breaks for them.
I can see some changes in the naga labyrinth after the war, I THINK mc should really start training his troops more (like spar and feedback) than relying on himself, he leads in not so bad way but somewhat lacking as his power and troops are expanding fast. I know his sentiments on protecting his home (the labyrinth and members) is strong but he basically backpack carry them which somewhat hindering their growth and experience. If he keeps that up the story will only highlight him and make his troops a mere decoration, a not so bad but a cliche and somewhat boring.
I am rooting for them to win and also a little character development for the mc.