So first off, this should have a “dark romance “ tag. MAYBE. But for sure something that notifies people this is a dark story.
1. Valery repeatedly rapes Asil throughout the entirety of this story. I don’t know if the 80 chapters is it, or if there’s more to come. But absolutely nothing happens in the first 60 chapters that even hint at Asil liking what’s happening to him. He is raped and beaten by Valery. Over and over. That’s the hard and honest truth. At no point does he ever say he likes it nor does he consent. The only time he actively seeks Valery out is when he’s trying to make a bargain for his family’s financial stability.
2. Valery actively rapes and ENJOYS causing Asil pain during the time frame mentioned above. Not only does he beat and rape Asil, Valery tries to mentally break Asil every chance he gets . He calls him a whore and play thing, but for some reason is surprised when Asil refers to him that way.
3 Whenever Asil tries to make a friend or even is talked to by someone of the opposite sex, Valery becomes anxious and violent. And again, resorts to raping Asil. If it seems like I’m being reparative, that’s on purpose because I really need whomever is reading this to understand that 90% of the interaction between the MLs is Nonconsensual . Like not even dubcon just flat out sexual assault.
4. I’m assuming Asil has a lot of pride, a trope I enjoy is when the MC threatens to k ll themselves in order to get the person pursuing them’s attention that they would rather die that endure. It I suppose in this story Asils family is what kept him from doing that at first, but once his sister betrayed him, and lured him back to Valery after 2 years , Which is MUCH later on, that would have been the time. OR maybe when his brother went off to study abroad. I mean it was still rape at that point. And Asil even takes a poison vial from what’s his face to slip in Valerys drink. We’ll never know if he would have actually done it, as Vallery found it first, but id think Asil would have done it given he stabbed Valery before
5. I genuinely think this is a case of Stockholm syndrome because there is no way realistically that you could fall for a person who violated you over and over to the point of you expecting to be hit when you talk back, and when you aren’t hit, you ask to be hit. I’m also not really sure I understand why Asil took the promotion to Lieutenant . I do understand by that point he was kind of resigned to his situation but I mean this is just crazy. I’ve seen some sick shit, this wasn’t as bad graphically/visually but I felt sick reading timst of this/the sex scenes. And even much much later when it starts being consensual, if you can call it that. It felt off. Forced even.
6. Bottom line is Asil should have escaped in Jenuka. He shouldn’t have come back to Vallery. And this should have ended in tragedy for Valery. He literally just raped Asil over and over until he decided he wanted Asils heart. To which we even see enternal monologue from Asil being frustrated that now not only does Valery want him to open himself up to him whenever he wants it like a whore, but he also wants his soul. Valery starts to “reflect” on what he’s done, but it can’t even be called that really. Not the beginning. And even as of ch.80. He makes a deal with Asil to let him go if his heart hasn’t swayed in a month , and when he awakens from jumping from the 2nd floor to save Asil, and doesn’t see him around. Valery immediately says he will find Asil and won’t honor the promise they made. Only because Asil has NO ONE, not his traitor sister, his horrible father, died at birth mother, or even his younger brother . Does he start developing “feelings” for Valery. It’s sinply Stockholm syndrome.
This was a hard read for me. BUT written well. I’m assuming we’re supposed to hate Valery. I personally am not forgiving him. I mean he’d trash. Motherfucker hasn’t changed really, no redemption, and no apology could ever amount to all of what he’s done to Asil. Seriously. But I do want to see this through to the end. So I’ll stick around to read to the end. But the 3/5 rating will stay regardless. Whomever cooked this up is banned from all cookouts and from touching utensils.
So first off, this should have a “dark romance “ tag. MAYBE. But for sure something that notifies people this is a dark story.
1. Valery repeatedly rapes Asil throughout the entirety of this story. I don’t know if the 80 chapters is it, or if there’s more to come. But absolutely nothing happens in the first 60 chapters that even hint at Asil liking what’s happening to him. He is raped and beaten by Valery. Over and over. That’s the hard and honest truth. At no point does he ever say he likes it nor does he consent. The only time he actively seeks Valery out is when he’s trying to make a bargain for his family’s financial stability.
2. Valery actively rapes and ENJOYS causing Asil pain during the time frame mentioned above. Not only does he beat and rape Asil, Valery tries to mentally break Asil every chance he gets . He calls him a whore and play thing, but for some reason is surprised when Asil refers to him that way.
3 Whenever Asil tries to make a friend or even is talked to by someone of the opposite sex, Valery becomes anxious and violent. And again, resorts to raping Asil. If it seems like I’m being reparative, that’s on purpose because I really need whomever is reading this to understand that 90% of the interaction between the MLs is Nonconsensual . Like not even dubcon just flat out sexual assault.
4. I’m assuming Asil has a lot of pride, a trope I enjoy is when the MC threatens to k ll themselves in order to get the person pursuing them’s attention that they would rather die that endure. It I suppose in this story Asils family is what kept him from doing that at first, but once his sister betrayed him, and lured him back to Valery after 2 years , Which is MUCH later on, that would have been the time. OR maybe when his brother went off to study abroad. I mean it was still rape at that point. And Asil even takes a poison vial from what’s his face to slip in Valerys drink. We’ll never know if he would have actually done it, as Vallery found it first, but id think Asil would have done it given he stabbed Valery before
5. I genuinely think this is a case of Stockholm syndrome because there is no way realistically that you could fall for a person who violated you over and over to the point of you expecting to be hit when you talk back, and when you aren’t hit, you ask to be hit. I’m also not really sure I understand why Asil took the promotion to Lieutenant . I do understand by that point he was kind of resigned to his situation but I mean this is just crazy. I’ve seen some sick shit, this wasn’t as bad graphically/visually but I felt sick reading timst of this/the sex scenes. And even much much later when it starts being consensual, if you can call it that. It felt off. Forced even.
6. Bottom line is Asil should have escaped in Jenuka. He shouldn’t have come back to Vallery. And this should have ended in tragedy for Valery. He literally just raped Asil over and over until he decided he wanted Asils heart. To which we even see enternal monologue from Asil being frustrated that now not only does Valery want him to open himself up to him whenever he wants it like a whore, but he also wants his soul. Valery starts to “reflect” on what he’s done, but it can’t even be called that really. Not the beginning. And even as of ch.80. He makes a deal with Asil to let him go if his heart hasn’t swayed in a month , and when he awakens from jumping from the 2nd floor to save Asil, and doesn’t see him around. Valery immediately says he will find Asil and won’t honor the promise they made. Only because Asil has NO ONE, not his traitor sister, his horrible father, died at birth mother, or even his younger brother . Does he start developing “feelings” for Valery. It’s sinply Stockholm syndrome.
This was a hard read for me. BUT written well. I’m assuming we’re supposed to hate Valery. I personally am not forgiving him. I mean he’d trash. Motherfucker hasn’t changed really, no redemption, and no apology could ever amount to all of what he’s done to Asil. Seriously. But I do want to see this through to the end. So I’ll stick around to read to the end. But the 3/5 rating will stay regardless. Whomever cooked this up is banned from all cookouts and from touching utensils.