The storyline is truly something new. It gets you hooked right away but for a piece this short, it’s really inconsistent. It’s like the author had an innovative idea but somewhere in the middle turned off their brain and the only grey brain cells were carrying ‘smut’ with them. I can’t get over the fact the wind guy was forgiven. And got such position after enormous betrayal? No brain cells left, I tell you. It’s disappointing because at first it looks like a good story but then just turns into porn.
The storyline is truly something new. It gets you hooked right away but for a piece this short, it’s really inconsistent. It’s like the author had an innovative idea but somewhere in the middle turned off their brain and the only grey brain cells were carrying ‘smut’ with them.
I can’t get over the fact the wind guy was forgiven. And got such position after enormous betrayal? No brain cells left, I tell you.
It’s disappointing because at first it looks like a good story but then just turns into porn.