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Its decent, but I feel like the author tried fitting a 60 chapter plot into 6 chapters �...

Bluee May 7, 2026 3:16 pm

Its decent, but I feel like the author tried fitting a 60 chapter plot into 6 chapters I feel like it could've been so much more well done as a short story if it was a bit less ‘complex’. Deserves a read though!

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