At first the story was nice, the "fight" against the blond girl to take back her position. Then oki fine she climb her way nice. Then oki we understand the "duke and his sons" was on a spell to hate her in previous life and now are regretful. Oki she grew and she is super powerful good good. But now it s only "Her majesty her majesty her majesty her majesty her majjjeeessstttyyyy" like gurl are you with the right ML at this point XD don't get me wrong I would think it is creepy if "her majesty' was the ML but this is no longer being greatful this is obsession XD. THEN FL and ML start their relationship oki oki fine they had a lot to talk about and then...... FL litteraly act like ML is granted and she is like "oh I know he can resist me" like girl your relationship just start ML is full on PTSD of previous life and feel unworthy FL didn't even had the idea in mind until they had their conversation. And now they act as if they both are 2000% into each other, talk about toxic relationship! I understand she need ML to stay alive but the co-dependancy level just took 100 steps further without any clear reason except "ML regreted her dying in previous life and sacrifised his heart". And the story since their night together is just around that so the last chapter is only "oh we spend a night together so (...) since we spend the night with each other (...) and HER MAJESTY!!! sleep together! HER MAJESTY"
I really hope for the story to improve a little bit, because the idea was very good, and yeah even if this was "easy writing everything work well for FL lazy pen author" at least it was interesting to see where it was going! But seriously if we get another chapter with no evolution of the story except for the "spend a night together/HER MAJESTY" thing seriously I don't think I can!! And this is sad because it was really interesting at the beginning.
At first the story was nice, the "fight" against the blond girl to take back her position. Then oki fine she climb her way nice. Then oki we understand the "duke and his sons" was on a spell to hate her in previous life and now are regretful. Oki she grew and she is super powerful good good. But now it s only "Her majesty her majesty her majesty her majesty her majjjeeessstttyyyy" like gurl are you with the right ML at this point XD don't get me wrong I would think it is creepy if "her majesty' was the ML but this is no longer being greatful this is obsession XD. THEN FL and ML start their relationship oki oki fine they had a lot to talk about and then...... FL litteraly act like ML is granted and she is like "oh I know he can resist me" like girl your relationship just start ML is full on PTSD of previous life and feel unworthy FL didn't even had the idea in mind until they had their conversation. And now they act as if they both are 2000% into each other, talk about toxic relationship! I understand she need ML to stay alive but the co-dependancy level just took 100 steps further without any clear reason except "ML regreted her dying in previous life and sacrifised his heart". And the story since their night together is just around that so the last chapter is only "oh we spend a night together so (...) since we spend the night with each other (...) and HER MAJESTY!!! sleep together! HER MAJESTY"
I really hope for the story to improve a little bit, because the idea was very good, and yeah even if this was "easy writing everything work well for FL lazy pen author" at least it was interesting to see where it was going! But seriously if we get another chapter with no evolution of the story except for the "spend a night together/HER MAJESTY" thing seriously I don't think I can!! And this is sad because it was really interesting at the beginning.