I really do like this so far, but at the same time, I can’t help but think that it reads like a worse written version of A Twisted Fate. It’s the ornate, overly formal language. ATF just does it so much better, and much more naturally.
What gets me is the language being overly formal then it also throws some random modern words in there. So jarring.
I really do like this so far, but at the same time, I can’t help but think that it reads like a worse written version of A Twisted Fate. It’s the ornate, overly formal language. ATF just does it so much better, and much more naturally.