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Kay May 10, 2026 3:42 pm

I really do like this so far, but at the same time, I can’t help but think that it reads like a worse written version of A Twisted Fate. It’s the ornate, overly formal language. ATF just does it so much better, and much more naturally.

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    Wambui July 23, 2026 12:23 am

    What gets me is the language being overly formal then it also throws some random modern words in there. So jarring.