I read the story all the way to the end out of curiousity and hoping that every question or doubt I have will be addressed in the end.
It was a promising story to be honest. But *sighs*. It didn’t feel like everything was wrapped up — more on the prince and Louis’s relationship. Idk if the prince just has a straight-faced expression naturally or what. He doesn’t seem to have more facial expressions. Also, we know the prince was hurt that Louis didn’t contact him after that first night and felt used or discarded or what, but that doesn’t justify the manipulation, coercion, “SA”…. When he knew the truth that MC was drugged and realized that he was the father, I guess I was hoping some kind of “mature” communication between both of them and apologies or acknowleding the wrong things done. Prince revealed his anxiety and worry that MC will probably leave him if MC knew the truth. They could’ve resolved it in the end if it was written and explored more. Prince has something going on in his head, similar to that Duke. Like he would let the murders go on just so MC would stay. I could go on and on about his character.
For Louis, Idk. He was attracted to the prince from the beginning and that’s just it. As for developing the feelings of love towards prince, I find it lacking. I’m glad he realized his worth enough not to be used as a plaything but still disappointed overall about his character. All I can say is that the character has potential but was wasted. Both prince and him.
I read the story all the way to the end out of curiousity and hoping that every question or doubt I have will be addressed in the end.
It was a promising story to be honest. But *sighs*. It didn’t feel like everything was wrapped up — more on the prince and Louis’s relationship.
Idk if the prince just has a straight-faced expression naturally or what. He doesn’t seem to have more facial expressions. Also, we know the prince was hurt that Louis didn’t contact him after that first night and felt used or discarded or what, but that doesn’t justify the manipulation, coercion, “SA”…. When he knew the truth that MC was drugged and realized that he was the father, I guess I was hoping some kind of “mature” communication between both of them and apologies or acknowleding the wrong things done. Prince revealed his anxiety and worry that MC will probably leave him if MC knew the truth. They could’ve resolved it in the end if it was written and explored more. Prince has something going on in his head, similar to that Duke. Like he would let the murders go on just so MC would stay. I could go on and on about his character.
For Louis, Idk. He was attracted to the prince from the beginning and that’s just it. As for developing the feelings of love towards prince, I find it lacking. I’m glad he realized his worth enough not to be used as a plaything but still disappointed overall about his character. All I can say is that the character has potential but was wasted. Both prince and him.