idk why this is so ahh

It comes off as really cringey, like something generated from an over-the-top “aristocratic drama” prompt. I’m not even sure if it’s based on a novel, but if it is, that honestly makes it worse. It feels so artificial that my first thought was that it had to be AI-generated.

The translation doesn’t help either. It’s clunky and hard to follow, and the meaning gets lost the moment you try to read between the lines. Instead of adding depth, it just creates confusion, like the sentences were stitched together without any real understanding of the context.

And because of that, it’s hard to stay immersed. You’re constantly pulled out of the story trying to make sense of what it’s even trying to say, which defeats the whole point. Even scenes that are supposed to feel emotional or dramatic end up feeling flat or unintentionally funny.