This story honestly had plenty of potential, but it felt rushed... the plot developments felt really quick and i feel as if we could afford to have more chapters extrapolating their relationship with each other idk. The bridge scene just felt so random. It feels ss if the author is trying to tell a larger story but cut out parts in the middle
This story honestly had plenty of potential, but it felt rushed... the plot developments felt really quick and i feel as if we could afford to have more chapters extrapolating their relationship with each other idk. The bridge scene just felt so random. It feels ss if the author is trying to tell a larger story but cut out parts in the middle