What’s so cringe about the hospital scene? Jk acknowledges that it’s his fault multiple times in the previous chapter though (??)
it's not his acknowledgement, that's what ticks me off. What I disliked isn't the idea behind the hospital scene, but the way it was executed, I feel it's sloppy yk. English it's not my first language so I'm sorry if I can't explain it well, but the fact is we're past 100 chapters here. 100 chapters of pain for us watching this dude jjk abuse poor kim dan and always be victimized, I'm sorry but I want something more from the suffer arc than 'oh, he was feeling really bad about being responsible from someone putting a knife in you ahaha' by someone else. This could be just an introduction to this arc, so maybe I spoke too early but really that scene didn't seat well with me at all, like what do you mean they answer 'ow, you're too good for your own good stupid kim dan'??? He literally said he is relieved he was the one to get the knife because jjk has to fight! The reaction would be of pure shock and disbelief like 'dude, what are you saying, you risked to effing dye!!'. Idk I think it was treated too lightly, that was a clear symptom of being abused or really just having reaaaally low estime of yourself. Because he wasn't out of love he was relieved jjk wasn't hurt, he present it like jjk's superior to himself (kim dan), so he deserves it more (??). That's what I mean I don't like the execution. But again I could be wrong and this'll be only the start of a more in depth exploration of the traumas kim dan brings and the deserved pain jjk has to go through (I've been waiting for this arc to unravel since the beginning tbh, that's what kept me here). Still, I have a feeling the finale is near and next chapter kim and jjk will make up and have sex, or viceversa; I don't trust the author so that's why I made that comment, sorry for rumbling(づ￣ ³￣)づ
the scene at te hospital when kim dan is conscious is a bit cringe, I mean, let me see the hurt jjk is going through because he found out it was his fault, dont let me know by someone else telling it (╯°Д °)╯╧╧. Show, don't tell, yk. JJK is finally lookig rough, I waited for this look on him since ch 1 and finally we're here, author san pls let him stay like that for some time before they reconciliate pls, let him sufferrrrr. Btw, the fact kim dan doesn't know how jjk's hand feel at this point in the storyis pretty strange, jjk really used his hands on kim dan, iykwim. Well, we'll see though, it feels a bit empty