This story feels incomplete. There are a few plot points that require answers: why are Rai's wings different from those in his race?? Who placed the egg in front of his house?? Why place the egg in front of Rai's house?? Who are the true parents of that egg?? And are the Winged people the ruling class or just a revered species?? Also, it's probably just me, but given from what I read, other than the accidental aphrodisiac there was no need for sexual intimacy to be in this story -- it could have stayed BL-lite aka shounen ai.
I have so many questions that this short piece didn't answer. It's an all right story just not that great of a read even if it is short. 2-stars.
This story feels incomplete. There are a few plot points that require answers: why are Rai's wings different from those in his race?? Who placed the egg in front of his house?? Why place the egg in front of Rai's house?? Who are the true parents of that egg?? And are the Winged people the ruling class or just a revered species?? Also, it's probably just me, but given from what I read, other than the accidental aphrodisiac there was no need for sexual intimacy to be in this story -- it could have stayed BL-lite aka shounen ai.
I have so many questions that this short piece didn't answer. It's an all right story just not that great of a read even if it is short. 2-stars.