This is getting way too much crap. I enjoyed it, I understand what happened, and it was a really interesting plot. The only criticism I have is that it could have felt more believable when they fell in love. I wish there was more chapters in the beginning to show the flow of their chemistry. But that was over quick, and afterwards I felt it was really good writing. PLEASE read the official translation, half the complaints are people who read the bad translation and blame the author.
They COULD have been more clear about certain events, but if you pay attention the answers are there. And if you DO catch what's going on, it's a really interesting plot with an awesome twist that explains multiple points in an "Oh! That was THAT?!" moment. Really interesting and definitely not done before.
Overall, I felt it was well planned and written. Probably not my favorite ever, but it was definitely worth the read. Maybe reading it in basically one sitting helped me catch everything? I don't know, I just feel like there's a lot worse BL that have waaay better reviews. Give it a chance if you like that supernatural genre.
Spoiler: About the ending, yeah it would be cool to have some side stories but I felt it was pretty obvious Jay wins the bet. That's kinda the point, he just loves Yoon SOOOO much it isn't even a challenge. How can he forget something that he is NEVER NOT thinking about. As he's said before, Yoon is always on his mind.
This is getting way too much crap. I enjoyed it, I understand what happened, and it was a really interesting plot. The only criticism I have is that it could have felt more believable when they fell in love. I wish there was more chapters in the beginning to show the flow of their chemistry. But that was over quick, and afterwards I felt it was really good writing. PLEASE read the official translation, half the complaints are people who read the bad translation and blame the author.
They COULD have been more clear about certain events, but if you pay attention the answers are there. And if you DO catch what's going on, it's a really interesting plot with an awesome twist that explains multiple points in an "Oh! That was THAT?!" moment. Really interesting and definitely not done before.
Overall, I felt it was well planned and written. Probably not my favorite ever, but it was definitely worth the read. Maybe reading it in basically one sitting helped me catch everything? I don't know, I just feel like there's a lot worse BL that have waaay better reviews. Give it a chance if you like that supernatural genre.
Spoiler:
About the ending, yeah it would be cool to have some side stories but I felt it was pretty obvious Jay wins the bet. That's kinda the point, he just loves Yoon SOOOO much it isn't even a challenge. How can he forget something that he is NEVER NOT thinking about. As he's said before, Yoon is always on his mind.