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Ugh the story premise is so good finally something interesting BUT THEN BOOM bad pacing an...

Fanatic May 14, 2026 11:38 pm

Ugh the story premise is so good finally something interesting BUT THEN BOOM bad pacing and and touchy too soon when it doesnt make sensegive then some time to know each other damn

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    bejo May 15, 2026 11:50 am

    Agree the premise and the ART!!! were so promising but this is just not it :(

    Maki May 16, 2026 9:42 pm

    Man, I feel you...

    cherrybloom May 23, 2026 5:13 pm

    i know!! unfortunately this is soooo common in bl

    Kahrin May 24, 2026 12:14 am

    I fear that this will be a short story