Imma be honest this had a lot of potential but was wasted and extremely shallow. The ending should’ve been less “oh I’m the creator I can solve everything” bam bam bam and more like “I’m the creator and I have to face the actions of my consequences” also they could’ve made the holy saint girl have more filled out character if they revealed more of her backstory with his majesty and share how the same thing she was doing to the soldiers he did to her so she took her anger out on them. Making her reasons less shallow and give more emotion. This at the end the protagonists understanding how her will allowed the majesty to gain control of her and corrupt her character she could had her reset aka tell the girl she will be reborn without her memories. The perfect ending would probably be her getting with their son and the protagonist thinking how this was the story she originally wanted or somethingz
Imma be honest this had a lot of potential but was wasted and extremely shallow. The ending should’ve been less “oh I’m the creator I can solve everything” bam bam bam and more like “I’m the creator and I have to face the actions of my consequences” also they could’ve made the holy saint girl have more filled out character if they revealed more of her backstory with his majesty and share how the same thing she was doing to the soldiers he did to her so she took her anger out on them. Making her reasons less shallow and give more emotion. This at the end the protagonists understanding how her will allowed the majesty to gain control of her and corrupt her character she could had her reset aka tell the girl she will be reborn without her memories. The perfect ending would probably be her getting with their son and the protagonist thinking how this was the story she originally wanted or somethingz