The backstory is actually not so bad, we get explanation of their past, and comprehend what made the present that way.
Sure it should be focused on the present, but with the past you actually feel a sense of what?? Idk pity?? Cus they were both very young and truly loved each other.
ML and FL were both to young and that led them to something tragic that caused them their relationship. Idk but I quiet pity them both no one should be able to experience that, buy hey not all path are the same.
Actually if you really a comprehensive person or an open minded one. Youll understand both Ml and FL and take pity on the both of them, their past made a scar to their relationship, hey they were young they were suppose to enjoy being inlove and yet they did, but with disadvantages regarding Financially and Emotionally.
Ml did try everything he understood that he, "the male" should protect and treasure FL; and she understood him to.
However we're in the present we see the burden left on her because the ml thinks she's the root of this and imagined the only person the FL needs is him. Cus he thinks "I got you out of your hell hole, and I protected you. You need me. " that why you wouldn't have the GUTS to leave me for another, cus I'm all you gut.
But that's SHIT minshit, you don't get to start things and pass it like some kind of ball, and let the other suffer. Even though you've done it for that person. YOU WERE YOUNG, BUT NOW YOUR A FUCKING MAN SO HAVE SOME GUYS TO PICK IT ALL UP AND DEAL WITH IT. I don't care how, I mean I'll still accept it if your have a deal with the FL to fix it since you both were responsible for it technically.
And that idiotic little lady gosh you know your being used , you just haven't realized it. Start acting like an adult.
The backstory is actually not so bad, we get explanation of their past, and comprehend what made the present that way.
Sure it should be focused on the present, but with the past you actually feel a sense of what?? Idk pity?? Cus they were both very young and truly loved each other.
ML and FL were both to young and that led them to something tragic that caused them their relationship. Idk but I quiet pity them both no one should be able to experience that, buy hey not all path are the same.
Actually if you really a comprehensive person or an open minded one. Youll understand both Ml and FL and take pity on the both of them, their past made a scar to their relationship, hey they were young they were suppose to enjoy being inlove and yet they did, but with disadvantages regarding Financially and Emotionally.
Ml did try everything he understood that he, "the male" should protect and treasure FL; and she understood him to.
However we're in the present we see the burden left on her because the ml thinks she's the root of this and imagined the only person the FL needs is him. Cus he thinks "I got you out of your hell hole, and I protected you. You need me. " that why you wouldn't have the GUTS to leave me for another, cus I'm all you gut.
But that's SHIT minshit, you don't get to start things and pass it like some kind of ball, and let the other suffer. Even though you've done it for that person. YOU WERE YOUNG, BUT NOW YOUR A FUCKING MAN SO HAVE SOME GUYS TO PICK IT ALL UP AND DEAL WITH IT. I don't care how, I mean I'll still accept it if your have a deal with the FL to fix it since you both were responsible for it technically.
And that idiotic little lady gosh you know your being used , you just haven't realized it. Start acting like an adult.