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There shouldn’t be a artifact plotline

Yin May 16, 2026 7:05 pm

The writing is really awful at balancing serious stuff to the point that they shouldn’t be writing it. They’re only just now addressing the royal palaces artifact at chapter 161 and it was basically a “oh btw we finally found a way” “okay let’s storm the place!” And it all happens in 1/3 of the chapter.. I really like this series but a whole political revolution and reorganization of the country meanwhile the main couple is drinking beer in Korea and having a honeymoon. Bold as hell to leave their kid behind too since she’s the one opening the portal the FL can go through

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    I May 23, 2026 12:02 pm

    I’m glad it’s not just me who thinks this It's honestly a bit of a mess right now. The timeline isn't making sense and the chapters feel so rushed. It's a shame because I used to love reading it before that elf showed up and tag along with him