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I dont know much about story writing let alone know how to critique one, just saying whatever comes to mind :,) Was a nice read though
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I dont know much about story writing let alone know how to critique one, just saying whatever comes to mind :,) Was a nice read though
??? Uh okay so thats how it ends? I really enjoyed this at the start but then all of the system stuff and world damage happened and, I dont know :/
I feel like there's questions I still have and I kind of expected a bit more from the side characters? I thought more was going to happen with Sangwon especially with that introduction and same with Kyunghoon aswell. I guess I just expected something after his reaction to the homo insults in that one chapter. Same goes with the original female protagonist, but she was just there for a bit and nothing really happened.
I don't really know but I feel like there could've been a bit more with the story and the ending wasn't that satisfying. Who the fuck is that sunbae anyway