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AI Is the worst. I was really confused how they went from him carrying her on the street with her dad dissappearing to a bed in the next panel.
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AI Is the worst. I was really confused how they went from him carrying her on the street with her dad dissappearing to a bed in the next panel.
Chapter 12-13 are the only chapters that lead me to believe it wasn’t actually written by a person. All the transitions that make the actions the characters take are weird and wonky. Like it’s jumping from one moment to the next without establishing some kind of baseline or solid background to explain anything. She and the ML go from fxcking to looking like they’ve been living together for a long time within the same chapter? Her dad treated her like shxt and she asked him to stay away, yet all of a sudden he calls and she jumps at the chance to meet him? Even the flow of conversation between her and the ML after she cries is odd. Chapters 1-11 were written better than that. It’s like the author just gave up and had a machine do the rest of the work.