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I was meant to push the lile but accidently pushed the wrong one sorry!! but yeah the pacing was sooo weird it startedboff really good then all of a sudden i was like huh how did we get here soooo weird story ended up really dumb by the end cause it jumped sooo much
Ok wait this is kinda weird,either i missed some chapters or the story had weird pacing for the plot?so after he kidnapped him he said and did all sorts of awful things to him but then the he gets kidnapped by other people and get sold(we dont see this actually happen or how he processed this) then he does again a 180 degree turn and all of sudden hes like I'll take you home(HOW DID HE TURN HIS OPINION SO SUDDENLY when we clearly see that there was no internal conflict whatsoever for him regarding whatever he was doing to the bottom, he was ENJOYING that situation) then the matter with the oasis and the whole drama??where did it all go??one moment they are getting ready to take over the place and the next we see its already been reclaimed??then the father??what was he trying to do? Yh i get he was gonna give him love and take it back but how and when?and if his father is out of the picture where did he get the money from? AND THE WORLD BUILDING?? So the technology is advanced enough to have this tech but they are supposedly using letters??