I've finally read this story after putting it aside for the longest time.Overall idea and beginning of the story were pretty good. But towards the end it became too inconsistent and lacking. I wish the story was more developed and thought through.
I've finally read this story after putting it aside for the longest time.
Overall idea and beginning of the story were pretty good. But towards the end it became too inconsistent and lacking. I wish the story was more developed and thought through.