I love the concept, but god, I think this story needs some padding. Like where's the foreshadowing and build up. It feels like we're constantly moving from one thing to the next. Despite this, I think I'll still keep tabs on this story.
I love the concept, but god, I think this story needs some padding. Like where's the foreshadowing and build up. It feels like we're constantly moving from one thing to the next. Despite this, I think I'll still keep tabs on this story.