First off, the art style is really pretty, so that's nice and all, i just want to let that out of the way before anything else. Now, this is definitely a story that would upset a huge percentage of readers. rape scene pretty much every other chapter or something, definitely a choice. I think it could have been a very interesting story should it have revolved more on the actual "curing" of the ED rather than the ED being an opening to just fuck and then fuck then fuck and then fuck again then just fuck again. Then again, the author did not expect the "positive" reaction from the readers so maybe the plot just decided to fuck around as well? 'cuz what was actually happening aside from fucking? Maybe if the story was thought off for more time it could, and this is a very suspiciously hopeful could, have been more clear and cohesive. but what's done is done, and this is just eh i guess, wishing for a better season 3? idk
First off, the art style is really pretty, so that's nice and all, i just want to let that out of the way before anything else.
Now, this is definitely a story that would upset a huge percentage of readers. rape scene pretty much every other chapter or something, definitely a choice. I think it could have been a very interesting story should it have revolved more on the actual "curing" of the ED rather than the ED being an opening to just fuck and then fuck then fuck and then fuck again then just fuck again. Then again, the author did not expect the "positive" reaction from the readers so maybe the plot just decided to fuck around as well? 'cuz what was actually happening aside from fucking?
Maybe if the story was thought off for more time it could, and this is a very suspiciously hopeful could, have been more clear and cohesive. but what's done is done, and this is just eh
i guess, wishing for a better season 3? idk