honestly I'll be real here. as a reader, this is an okayish story. it's one that you can read to waste your time. it's not a storythat will change your life in general. for some it might be as stories are all about preferences. but as a writer? this is absolutely buns. the story overall is nice. there is potentialto it. it's very cliche tbh but sometimes cliche can be turned into something new but this???? this is the cliche of all cliches. it's simply not done well. it's just there. like the story is just there. as if there wasn't any effort done in writing it. it's quite a predictable story that's why it's not good. and the characters are just characters. they exist for the story but you cannot seperate them from the story like you can do with actually well written characters. even if you might think that some of them get development like the seme but even those are half assed....if you can call that an actual development....... honestly I'm all for second chance stories BUT WHEN THEY'RE WELL WRITTEN. when there's actually a GOOD redemption. it's very unfortunate to see a lot of stories like this one overall tbh. half assed slop i do like the story but i still think that there should've been more effort in writing it and planning it out.
honestly I'll be real here. as a reader, this is an okayish story. it's one that you can read to waste your time. it's not a storythat will change your life in general. for some it might be as stories are all about preferences. but as a writer? this is absolutely buns. the story overall is nice. there is potentialto it. it's very cliche tbh but sometimes cliche can be turned into something new but this???? this is the cliche of all cliches. it's simply not done well. it's just there. like the story is just there. as if there wasn't any effort done in writing it. it's quite a predictable story that's why it's not good. and the characters are just characters. they exist for the story but you cannot seperate them from the story like you can do with actually well written characters. even if you might think that some of them get development like the seme but even those are half assed....if you can call that an actual development....... honestly I'm all for second chance stories BUT WHEN THEY'RE WELL WRITTEN. when there's actually a GOOD redemption. it's very unfortunate to see a lot of stories like this one overall tbh. half assed slop i do like the story but i still think that there should've been more effort in writing it and planning it out.