The beginning was absolutely amazing so well written to make them real. I loved their relationship, it made me kick my feet and giggle. But the system got in the way too much, the ending reminds of inso's law. Forgetting then suddenly remembering, something I dislike deeply. The ending was horrible the it seems like the author tried to make a really plot twist and complex ending that the author didn't deliver well at all. The ending rushed and showed little of the development they both had. It rushed what should had been heartfelt and emotional, it made me bitter and confused instead. Thinking stuff like "What the hell kind of ending is that, I could write a way better in my sleep" and I still feel that way. I really liked this story, I loved the development in both their characters and the ending just completely ruined it for me. And it left a lot of questions I wanted strongly to be answer, who was the sundae? Why was he doing this? And why was i the system like that? I felt cheated of a good ending and especially of the deep dive into the other characters as well. I wanted to learn more about Sang for example. And the main story and the main characters, it never dove into it
My ending thought of this all was that I was deeply disappointed and let down. I feel cheated of the ending this story could have produced. The beginning was absolutely amazing and the concept was extremely interesting. This story and it's ending shows that even with an interesting concept and an amazing start, things can go down hill in just a matter of a few chapters. Not everything is guaranteed so you shouldn't expect it.
*Warning: Long rant*
The beginning was absolutely amazing so well written to make them real. I loved their relationship, it made me kick my feet and giggle. But the system got in the way too much, the ending reminds of inso's law. Forgetting then suddenly remembering, something I dislike deeply. The ending was horrible the it seems like the author tried to make a really plot twist and complex ending that the author didn't deliver well at all. The ending rushed and showed little of the development they both had. It rushed what should had been heartfelt and emotional, it made me bitter and confused instead. Thinking stuff like "What the hell kind of ending is that, I could write a way better in my sleep" and I still feel that way. I really liked this story, I loved the development in both their characters and the ending just completely ruined it for me. And it left a lot of questions I wanted strongly to be answer, who was the sundae? Why was he doing this? And why was i the system like that? I felt cheated of a good ending and especially of the deep dive into the other characters as well. I wanted to learn more about Sang for example. And the main story and the main characters, it never dove into it
My ending thought of this all was that I was deeply disappointed and let down. I feel cheated of the ending this story could have produced. The beginning was absolutely amazing and the concept was extremely interesting. This story and it's ending shows that even with an interesting concept and an amazing start, things can go down hill in just a matter of a few chapters. Not everything is guaranteed so you shouldn't expect it.
Finshed in a day.