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It started out really promising, but the plot was not so great. Lots of plot holes, and I ...

Pandaberika May 24, 2026 6:58 pm

It started out really promising, but the plot was not so great. Lots of plot holes, and I don't know if it's just me, but I barely understood what was going on. I did really like the connection between the MCs, but I wish that was shown and explored more rather than basically the whole "bad guy" arch. The memory loss plotline really hindered a lot of the development too. I also wish they had given a reason why they couldn't kill the doctor.

Worth the read since it was guideverse, but it barely made the cut for me.

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