Obviously I get like not liking this cause ew, BUT ITS SUPPOSED TO BE EW! I had to put this down while reading it bc ugh Oml DANIEL U FREAK! But it reminded me a lot of mysterious skin with how Daniel hooks up a lot and even gets beat up (tho that story is a lot different bc the mc only hooks up with older men bc he was raped as a child). From a story standpoint this was really good and felt rlly real. The only thing that didn’t feel ENTIRELY believable is how quick Logan was to accept Daniel. Like I feel like he should’ve been a little more grossed out when Daniel first told him he was actually into his dad (but still want to be the ‘replacement’ bc yk he was into Daniel) and I really do like the groveling and regret arc with Daniel but I think this would’ve been 100x better if it had like 1 more chapter and had Logan still pissed and keeping Daniel at a distance and have him grovel more. Solid like 6.5/10 story imo.
Obviously I get like not liking this cause ew, BUT ITS SUPPOSED TO BE EW! I had to put this down while reading it bc ugh Oml DANIEL U FREAK! But it reminded me a lot of mysterious skin with how Daniel hooks up a lot and even gets beat up (tho that story is a lot different bc the mc only hooks up with older men bc he was raped as a child). From a story standpoint this was really good and felt rlly real. The only thing that didn’t feel ENTIRELY believable is how quick Logan was to accept Daniel. Like I feel like he should’ve been a little more grossed out when Daniel first told him he was actually into his dad (but still want to be the ‘replacement’ bc yk he was into Daniel) and I really do like the groveling and regret arc with Daniel but I think this would’ve been 100x better if it had like 1 more chapter and had Logan still pissed and keeping Daniel at a distance and have him grovel more. Solid like 6.5/10 story imo.