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Mid ass chasing arc

BabyMineDontCry May 26, 2026 2:34 pm

This was one of the most mid chasing arcs i’ve had the displeasure of witnessing. That whole sobbing shit is lazy writing. It’s like a trend now to show the toxic top sobbing on his knees to show remorse and then the uke forgives him. It’s a good detail when done correctly but it’s just plastered at the end to show why the bottom stayed, its super lazy in my opinion

Responses
    PennyL4D4nt3D4W1s3 May 26, 2026 2:51 pm

    THAT'S WHAT I'VE BEEN SAYING!!!

    Aks May 26, 2026 3:23 pm

    Finally! Someone with some common sense!! The poor Dan has been a SA victim all along and now the author wants him to keep loving this mf! She didn't even try to do a proper redemption arc (even though SA and all the other shit Kim dan went through shouldn't been redeemable AT ALL. But ofc the victim can't ever be fulfilled happy alone can they? -note the sarcasm-)

    Lavinia May 26, 2026 3:26 pm

    Author loves black flags.. I mean ok i do you boo.. But atleast make the chasing arc worthwhile. Imo maybe author will do well as an artist and just work with a good writer (learn a thing or two). Hoping it happen for her next project (if there will still be)

    Lavinia May 26, 2026 3:27 pm
    Author loves black flags.. I mean ok i do you boo.. But atleast make the chasing arc worthwhile. Imo maybe author will do well as an artist and just work with a good writer (learn a thing or two). Hoping it hap... Lavinia

    *u do u