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I hope there will be side chapters that Explore some of them. And what about potato? I want to see his Story more
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I hope there will be side chapters that Explore some of them. And what about potato? I want to see his Story more
what do you mean the end next chapter, there is no time for happiness? haha only glimpse maybe okay, but as someone previously mentioned, Dan is being miserable, not feeling loved and happy all along.
this ending seems rushed for no reason, there could be +30 chapters with honeymoon phase + JK going back to MMA, then granny's death and how JK will help Dan go through it and this will solidify their bond/relationship, double date with Potato/actor, Dan getting spot by paparazzi / JK coming out with Dan relationship with proposal + happy end / wedding. Including all the necessary sex scenes ofcourse, maybe add +10 for this
Yes I will just imagine this happened and be done with this.