The story started strong but then the mood shifted completely. I dunno, something about the grape scene didnt fit well and everything after just felt.. forced?
I get bottom had issues and clearly was set to self sabotage but the catalyst was just that he saw top being violent and not the shame? This needed better explanation imo.
Also many loose ends like what happened to minjuuk and the father.. I think this story could have been better with more chapters and deeper self reflection on bottoms part. I
The story started strong but then the mood shifted completely. I dunno, something about the grape scene didnt fit well and everything after just felt.. forced?
I get bottom had issues and clearly was set to self sabotage but the catalyst was just that he saw top being violent and not the shame? This needed better explanation imo.
Also many loose ends like what happened to minjuuk and the father.. I think this story could have been better with more chapters and deeper self reflection on bottoms part. I