For stories like this one i think it would be better if it was not separated in such small chapters. And have so many of them over such a long period of time. Cause the story is great but I just think people have no patience. They just want flowers and sparkles. And bring them quick. This is a very realistic pacing with an extremely realistic flow of the story. I mean sure the story so far is 1 year long. But it's not that long if you're actually thinking about it. Girly was asaulted by her own father for like 20 something years. She has been abused physicaly and mentaly for so long it would be wierd if she suddenly changed. And he was on different battlefields for like 16 years straight. And his life wasn't really sweet peaches before that either. Also so many people just complain that they don't comunicate. HOW??? With skills picked from WHERE??? Ffs in real life in order to have good communication skills you need practice and to learn them from SOMEWHERE or SOMEONE. Like theraphy, which they don't have. In terms of character development, there is a lot of it for both of them. And still a lot more to come. But yeah... The pacing is slow. Cause it's a very well written story. And a lot of shit happens. And if some of you guys taught the story was frustrating so far... Well i'm sorry, but you won't like what's about to come.
For stories like this one i think it would be better if it was not separated in such small chapters. And have so many of them over such a long period of time. Cause the story is great but I just think people have no patience. They just want flowers and sparkles. And bring them quick. This is a very realistic pacing with an extremely realistic flow of the story.
I mean sure the story so far is 1 year long. But it's not that long if you're actually thinking about it. Girly was asaulted by her own father for like 20 something years. She has been abused physicaly and mentaly for so long it would be wierd if she suddenly changed. And he was on different battlefields for like 16 years straight. And his life wasn't really sweet peaches before that either.
Also so many people just complain that they don't comunicate. HOW??? With skills picked from WHERE??? Ffs in real life in order to have good communication skills you need practice and to learn them from SOMEWHERE or SOMEONE. Like theraphy, which they don't have.
In terms of character development, there is a lot of it for both of them. And still a lot more to come. But yeah... The pacing is slow. Cause it's a very well written story. And a lot of shit happens.
And if some of you guys taught the story was frustrating so far... Well i'm sorry, but you won't like what's about to come.