i was hoping the story will improve and i keep going on and on and yet..i feel disappointed.
i was hoping for the redemption arc that will atlest make me care..yet i didn't.
the mc is miserablely love these 2, i understand he open his valurable side to his brother..but its was such mess even on the mid part of Story!.. i wish to care for these characters but yet i can't, the author way of execute was make me have different opinion which is why i have bad taste toward the ending.
maybe becouse how it handled toward these characters and how they could get away toward their action..overall if u want i don't even know if that could be category as good, but there buncha..as for story, it might disappointed some readers..some will definitely liking it for some reason.
i was hoping the story will improve and i keep going on and on and yet..i feel disappointed.
i was hoping for the redemption arc that will atlest make me care..yet i didn't.
the mc is miserablely love these 2, i understand he open his valurable side to his brother..but its was such mess even on the mid part of Story!.. i wish to care for these characters but yet i can't, the author way of execute was make me have different opinion which is why i have bad taste toward the ending.
maybe becouse how it handled toward these characters and how they could get away toward their action..overall if u want i don't even know if that could be category as good, but there buncha..as for story, it might disappointed some readers..some will definitely liking it for some reason.