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time for criticism

skye_faye June 1, 2026 3:42 am

The pacing is odd, certain situation feel random, characters? - who? What? Why? Where? Huh?; furthermore: the plot's full of holes and some of them are so shallow that the whole topics should just drop and begone, everything's out of place, it just feels forced. I can't chew this at all. Flavourless

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