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ngl

U_U June 2, 2026 6:21 pm

i thought this would be at least decent enough to read. sad to say i kinda wasted my time reading this. although thr catching of a murderer plot was quite entertaining, that plot just kinda fell flat. I mean, the whole story did a 180 when it was just a simple “change the future plot to become his husband,” i dont understand the reasoning behind the inclusion of the murder arc. yes, this would have been better if it were longer, that way that plot could have had more time to develop, and the story could have had a slow transition to that type of genre or vibe. overall i think the story was just all over the place (like my mind). I would definitely read this again just to see if my mind would change.

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