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I kinda get where the ending was supposed to be going but the momentum was so sudden it fe...

Helios June 2, 2026 6:50 pm

I kinda get where the ending was supposed to be going but the momentum was so sudden it fell flat. Something felt missing after the rollercoaster of emotions they went through together. Their issues weren't truly resolved but it somehow fits them both because they're clumsy. The delivery was weak though.
I sorta expected this will end in September when the angst peaked with baldie and the oldie planning shit but the plot went cliff diving suddenly and we're here at the bottom in June.

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    Helios June 2, 2026 6:57 pm

    Still. Thank you author for the story. Imma read bj alex sides now cuz I need to sort this vast space I'm feeling down this gorge (≧∀≦)