The one i will criticise is how they handle when the grandma gone. I wish it more emotional, especially their story and kim dan's life revolves around grandma, those big wardrobe, how he still trying to be alive when depressed.
The one that have a perfect goodbye is taesun from that yellow snake (geumryang) manhwa. When grandpa gone is really heartbroken and sad. In here i don't feel any sadness. I think if kim dan and grandma have more screen time alone instead of thanking jaekyung , it will be perfect. She can thank him offscreen or something.
The jaekyung and coach one has far more better ending story lol.
I don't really mind about the rushed ending between jaekyung and dan cause they can easily feel the gap in side story.
The one i will criticise is how they handle when the grandma gone. I wish it more emotional, especially their story and kim dan's life revolves around grandma, those big wardrobe, how he still trying to be alive when depressed.
The one that have a perfect goodbye is taesun from that yellow snake (geumryang) manhwa. When grandpa gone is really heartbroken and sad. In here i don't feel any sadness. I think if kim dan and grandma have more screen time alone instead of thanking jaekyung , it will be perfect.
She can thank him offscreen or something.
The jaekyung and coach one has far more better ending story lol.
I don't really mind about the rushed ending between jaekyung and dan cause they can easily feel the gap in side story.