I like the general idea of this story, i feel like the potential for drama and a good chasing arc was good.... But the betrayal is too big and theres not enough pay off, ML should have suffered so much more for abandoning him and not believing him, specially considering it was his partner of seven years who was injured! It feels like he is more worried about his business than MC. In the end even after the little chase and the grovelling he still was hesitant to cut business with the family of the equestrian center. MC is far too understanding. He literally thinks "well he needs to think about his employees"... but you were blinded!!! What about your life?!! And yout job?? What if he never recovered would he have been able to keep working as a florist??? There was not enough accountability by how severe his accident was.
I like the general idea of this story, i feel like the potential for drama and a good chasing arc was good.... But the betrayal is too big and theres not enough pay off, ML should have suffered so much more for abandoning him and not believing him, specially considering it was his partner of seven years who was injured! It feels like he is more worried about his business than MC. In the end even after the little chase and the grovelling he still was hesitant to cut business with the family of the equestrian center. MC is far too understanding. He literally thinks "well he needs to think about his employees"... but you were blinded!!! What about your life?!! And yout job?? What if he never recovered would he have been able to keep working as a florist??? There was not enough accountability by how severe his accident was.