well for starters the start was really that rough, it kinda softened it for me when I realized jaek didn't know kdm was a virgin and only us readers can sympathize with him, it did seem like it hit him bad enough and realized the gravity of his actions so that's that, I just wish he suffered more over a few chapters, he suffered yeah but he was still enjoying the presence of kdm unlike at least on bj alex
If he actually changed and had unrushed character development then yes. Nothing about him has changed, other than falling in love. He had less character development than in most stories with already healthy relationships.
While in criticism for the overall story I will agree that the ending could have been prolonged for a few more chapters as a person who has written and is friends with writers 2 and possibly more years of writing is a lot and some segments are meant to be rushed especially if it’s an original work and not a rework of a book which some minor complaints aren’t much but I believe the original poster of the comments wishes to refer to how it feel like rushing does feel uncomfortable but most people are focusing on tiny details instead of enjoying the overall piece.
Exactly. Rushed ending obviously but still, its a happy one. Everyone's throwing out the baby with the bathwater over it. Kim Dan smiling so thats all I cared about tbh lol
Im fully convince there isnt an ending that would have made any of yall happy, dang. Lol