The way i already saw this rushed, lazy writing away once author starts glazing over dan's depression and sleepwalking like they were just some fever dream...
I get it, author already has public interest from bj alex and the art skills in their manwhas, but they didn't seem to learn from any criticisms this story has gotten over for YEARS. Feels like they just know they'll get the views anyway, so why bother properly fleshing out the story for at least 10 more chapters? And seriously, that villaim terrorized the shit out of them both for so long, and all he got was 1 clip of news slxkdnejxisjsja not even the pervy doctor murderer
The way i already saw this rushed, lazy writing away once author starts glazing over dan's depression and sleepwalking like they were just some fever dream...
I get it, author already has public interest from bj alex and the art skills in their manwhas, but they didn't seem to learn from any criticisms this story has gotten over for YEARS. Feels like they just know they'll get the views anyway, so why bother properly fleshing out the story for at least 10 more chapters? And seriously, that villaim terrorized the shit out of them both for so long, and all he got was 1 clip of news slxkdnejxisjsja not even the pervy doctor murderer