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Well i read the extra and i guess we did complete it about the miscarriage but i still think we could have explored the grief more
A valid take, as much as i absolutely love the story, it could've done well with more chapters and more time on ml
I liked it but its very shallow in prospect the ml writting seems incomplete in his emotional development and maturing and also it was very inconsistant and seemed to forget his development and go back to being an ass after he made a realisation, just like he only realised his wife wasn’t ok not when he found pills box and drawer not when she ran into the sea just because but because she apologized and to him that was the most disturbing thing ever, and the miscariage was skimmed through i really hated that and we haven’t really gotten in her head like we know she tried 3 times but we only got much out of the second attempt. Comparing this to « It was just a contractual marriage » and « Lucia » this one has gotten way too quick over everything which made it lower in writting quality we really needed more out of the characters.(〜￣△￣)〜