Let me talk about this sequel. First, I can see how well the mangaka crafted this story. Ryuu's story is well-written phases about how they meet, grow close, and then fall in love. The story is packed into just six chapters, and it doesn't feel forced (again, this is my opinion). Secondly, I was caught off guard by the story about SIL and Ryuu in the middle. I didn't expect Ryuu was being groomed, and the worst since she was his brother's girlfriend. Even after giving birth, Ryuu was forced to meet the woman again, even though he no longer had feelings for her, still, that's awful. Lastly, as I mentioned earlier, this story is proper and I find Ayumu's tsundere character adorable. I understand why he often doesn't express his feelings well, as he admits at the end of the chapter that he has a lot to hide and it has become a habit. So far, I prefer the first story even though Ryuu's story is so really good if the mangaka don't put the SIL things. Also, it's sad that Shouya and Tsubame's relationship isn't explored more, and I think they both had the potential to get six chapters as well. I hope both couples get their more volumes!
Let me talk about this sequel.
First, I can see how well the mangaka crafted this story. Ryuu's story is well-written phases about how they meet, grow close, and then fall in love. The story is packed into just six chapters, and it doesn't feel forced (again, this is my opinion).
Secondly, I was caught off guard by the story about SIL and Ryuu in the middle. I didn't expect Ryuu was being groomed, and the worst since she was his brother's girlfriend. Even after giving birth, Ryuu was forced to meet the woman again, even though he no longer had feelings for her, still, that's awful.
Lastly, as I mentioned earlier, this story is proper and I find Ayumu's tsundere character adorable. I understand why he often doesn't express his feelings well, as he admits at the end of the chapter that he has a lot to hide and it has become a habit.
So far, I prefer the first story even though Ryuu's story is so really good if the mangaka don't put the SIL things. Also, it's sad that Shouya and Tsubame's relationship isn't explored more, and I think they both had the potential to get six chapters as well. I hope both couples get their more volumes!