Nice art, intriguing premise. I needed more time for the main leads to connect and fall for one another though. The mystery/backstory could have been handled better; the plot twist reveal was quite clunky, I felt the dialog was unnatural at points.
Nice art, intriguing premise. I needed more time for the main leads to connect and fall for one another though. The mystery/backstory could have been handled better; the plot twist reveal was quite clunky, I felt the dialog was unnatural at points.