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Just a little more thought for the small details please

Fiction Fixated June 6, 2026 10:14 pm

I’m just coming back after a long time but I’m starting to realize why I put it down. Similar to grammar mistakes in a novel, there are minor inconsistencies or oversights that just nag at me about this story. The top most being WHY DOESN’T HE HAVE TRAINING CLOTHES?! Seriously, he works out in the same fancy pants and shoes he wears everyday. He’s supposed to be a noble he looks like a bum while traveling (ch 29). All feels very incomplete ( ̄へ ̄)

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